All Comments on 'Private, Don't Look Ch. 01'

So excited to read the Next part ;)

I really like different,

Thanks,

MGM

nice beginning, can't wait for the rest. I hope there's more space for some interesting developments though, since this seems like the intrigue might be finished and the fucking will be all over the place. I say that since sometimes once the main development is finished, with some authors the story switches into non stop fucking, while it's nice to have some, it becomes a bit boring after a bit xD

Thanks everyone for the comments and the votes. I really appreciate the feedback.

This story is planned for at least six chapters, and likely more. I plan to post a new chapter one per week. Please check back next week for the next chapter.

Really liked it all so far and looking forward to reading the next one!

Very clever and very sexy. I can't find a criticism. Looking eagerly ahead for Ch 2

Now That's just 'So Fuckin Hot' 🔥😜

Brilliantly written, loved ever line. Thanks, can’t wait to get through all the chapters.. thanks