All Comments on 'Protective Services'

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snakes454snakes454about 10 years ago
please

Please if you insist on putting your garbage out for all to sed keep it short so we don't have toov far to scroll to give your 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I gave it a 5 to offest you

ass hole comment and vote. I mean can you tell us why the fuck you read these stories if you don't like them. WTF is wrong with you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
A fun read, but

A fun read, but it's hard to imagine any professional risking his reputation and business in this way. I know guys would take advantage when offered but to push it like this is a little too much.

snakes454snakes454about 10 years ago
@OFFSETTING CUCKBOY

First off loser I didn't read it. I have read 2 of this jerk-off's offerings and found them both wanting. He can't write and his shit is as erotic as a pair of shit stained shorts. I didn't read it but I had no issue giving him the 1 star he deserves. Now I'll go read a real story, I see SS06 has an offering.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I gave this a 1 to offset the five

I agree with snake, Stang has a story that's already rated above 4 stars, unlike this trash, it's a good thing we got a handful of good erotic authors on this site, most of them are nothing but shit writers catering to the cuckies

tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
THOSE THAT CRY WOLF

are doomed in a real crisis and there will be many, TK U MLJ LV NV

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 10 years ago
More obvious consent

Sweetie provides more obvious consent to 'ravishment' in this story that is typical in an Ashson offering. It kinda reminds me about the story of the Grizzly and the Hunter who repeatedly upgrades his rifle!

4*

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 10 years ago
Opps - editing

... THAN is typical ... Sorry!

sandymonroesandymonroeabout 10 years ago

It was nicely written and funny. Thanks!

PoesproppiePoesproppieabout 8 years ago
Nice twist to this tale

5 stars another excellent wee tale.

PP

ronexearonexeaalmost 4 years ago
Another good story

Well done. Thanks.

Please note that there is a considerable difference between discrete and discreet, also between of and off.

Otherwise a first class offering.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 3 years ago
Was that supposed to be erotic?

He's a perv. He betrayed the trust of his client. He's dirt.

gingerhuntergingerhunterabout 3 years ago
Unexpected foreign travel

After Charles learned how the MC had treated Brandi, he happened to mention to the three letter agency behind the War on Terror related contract his firm had been awarded that someone had sought to achieve influence over him through his wife during the selection process. The power of the Patriot Act and patriotic aversion to rapists, foreign or domestic, combined to result in the extraordinary rendition of the MC to Saudi Arabia where MBS gave him the welcome normally reserved for intrepid reporters and journalists in that desert kingdom.

Unlike the case of Khashoggi, however, the MC's disappearance generated little reaction other than Charles' sense of grim satisfaction and Brandi's remembrances involving two types of red cheeks.

Schwanze1Schwanze1about 3 years ago
And then it got stupid

Great set up though. What a waste.

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