All Comments on 'Ray's Ring Ch. 03'

by julybear7

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
keep going!

Please write longer chapters and more of them!

Great story so far.

Can't wait to read more!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 13 years ago
It reads as if he is beginning to know his powers

An interesting read, a little spooky but still a good read.

Thanks

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