All Comments on 'Ray's Ring Ch. 07'

This is a good story but the following portion indicates an ongoing problem with the editing.

" Yes, I have been able to alter it to fit her DNA. It was not a huge alteration. Yours has obviously been a close knit family. You will have the ability to read, but not control minds; the ability for telekinesis, which Harry can explain to you, and enhanced empathic ability, all of which will make your chosen work easier, and you better at your job. You also will be able to manipulate your perception of time, which I am sure Harry will be most happy to help you master."

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The family is getting to be a very close knit family. With him fucking both of his sisters and then his sister in law, the only immediate family member left is his mom.

I wonder if he will tap his mom's pussy too.

Thanks for the read.

I feel you rushed this way to fast. I wanted to read about him screwing the two sisters and you screwd us out of it. That makes you a lazy writer.