All Comments on 'Ray's Ring Ch. 10'

Good writing, Good story line, characters are being nicely fleshed out, and an element of not only surprise but foreboding. Keep the chapters coming.

Totally erotic and loving.

The stud is going to be a well used bull before this ceremony is over.

A great chapter, thanks

First off I liked the story. That said, I have to wonder where it came from. Nothing in the previous chapters said anything about a colony. The priest said they knew everything that a ring bearer heard or experienced. Therefore, they would have known about the colony and all these rituals and had Ray seek out his step mom for information. Seems like you are changing the story out of left field. On its own though, the story is Well written as most of your stories are.