by Scorpio44
When a couple gets as intimate as this one can almost feel the bond which unites them. This kind of intimacy can only happen between a couple who are completely in love. Beautifully written story.
Humor, deception, sex, but best of all, two somewhat damaged people finding each other and getting their heads straightened out. I liked the writing and I liked the characters.
If only all of the stories on this site could be so good, but then it would not have stood out like it does.
I echo the sentiments of the first two contributors. You always do interesting and engaging work, Scorpio!
Well SCORPIO you have blessed us again with your creative skills. True love with just a touch of comedy – what more could anybody ask for? Stories of such high quality are not what we expect from LITEROTICA these days. Pete.
Dialogue bogged down a little when they were talking after the 4-way scene but this was otherwise a great read and full of really nice imagery. Can Pete come take MY picture next?
What a pity there isn't a cheating/cuckolding category so that we could avoid the rubbish and just read more good quality stuff like this.
loved the peeing scenes when they met the other couple....need more stories about men and women peeing together - over each other and drinking pee.....have tried it and loved it....