by geronimo_appleby
...I had been attracted to it by the mention of piss, and so was disappointed that the act was barely a couple of paragraphs out of the whole thing. Geronimo writes beautifully and the back story to her descent into slutishness was a delight, but it left out how she developed her fetish for piss, which was my second disappointment. Beyond that though, top marks for a hot read that left me diddling my kitty like a teenager!
Very sexy, very dirty. I liked the backstory too; I got a real character along with really hot scenes. Well done.