All Comments on 'S.I.D Ch. 01-06'

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gunmakergunmaker6 months ago

Very well written. Well thought out. Did you use other stories as examples? I believe I see some influence from a couple of movies though not sure. Obviously it is left wide open for some more chapters. I believe I would leave this as is.

SoNaughtySoNaughty6 months ago

Wow! I may not be able to see well enough to edit your stories anymore but your new editor is brilliant as well as you are brilliant in writing them. This story has a lot of imagination. Gave you 5 stars!

jwswinglejwswingle6 months ago

In a streaming world, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next episode. Delayed gratification, appropriate for the story. Great so far. I don't know if I want SID to become more a sentient being and lover, and less bot, or to see some kind of erotic horror show develop. It's all your call, but so far, I am all in.

contestwinnercontestwinner6 months ago

Reminds me a bit of Football Star. Great work as always.

contestwinnercontestwinner6 months ago

I've read this 3 times now and wow!

Thanks for producing such amazing work.

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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