by jasliz
Very well written. Well thought out. Did you use other stories as examples? I believe I see some influence from a couple of movies though not sure. Obviously it is left wide open for some more chapters. I believe I would leave this as is.
Wow! I may not be able to see well enough to edit your stories anymore but your new editor is brilliant as well as you are brilliant in writing them. This story has a lot of imagination. Gave you 5 stars!
In a streaming world, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next episode. Delayed gratification, appropriate for the story. Great so far. I don't know if I want SID to become more a sentient being and lover, and less bot, or to see some kind of erotic horror show develop. It's all your call, but so far, I am all in.