by coaster2
I'm trying to guess what direction this will go to, but I give up. I'll wait. Very nice story so far Coaster. G.Belgium
You are certainly keeping us guessing. Carry on we will be here.
You have brought us along with some surprising turns on a very nice story. I have been a big fan since your first submittal and hope you are a long time contributor as some of your pieces have been as good as it gets.
Terrific story! I can't wait to log on each day for the next chapter!
You have done a great job of using role reversal to give the story a new edge and anticipation. Looking forward to the next chapter.<P>Thank you for the entertainment.<p>PT
I'm enjoying the tale - thank you. Even as much as I like the tale, I can't help seeing a repeat here. Ah yes, secrets among the ladies. That is exactly what happened with his first wife: secrets with her sister. The MC should realize that he needs better communication with his soon-to-be 2nd wire or he's going to have issues in the future.
Clever Bonnie was a shark to rope in Brent and then mark her territory for a sales job so she can enjoy traveling the Coast while cucky Brent plays housewife!! Bitch Bonnie is already making unilateral decisions on their relationship and cucky boy Brent is toeing the line