by soular
Soular, you ain't lied! This is definitely different from your last story. Loved it!!!!
Oh, I can't wait to see what's in store for Victoria and Nic. This was so GOOD. Thank you, thank you!! Nic is sexy, even if he is a bastard. Mm. Can't wait for the second chapter. Please update soon!!
Cannot wait for more!! I have a feeling these are going to get very intense for Nic and Victoria. :)
Great start Soular! I can see this is going to be another amzaing story Ok Nic sounds hot as hell! But he's a total ass! Hopefully there will be some good qualitites about him that will surface to change my opion as the story continues. But right now I'm kind of rooting for Victoria to slit his throat!lol I have a feeling by the end of this story Victoria will Mr sexy bad boy Nic chasing her like a dog chasing his tail. Just make sure she brings him to his knees and has him begging for mercy before she gives into him! lol!
Great first chapter! But don't let Victoria be too submissive, it's just not right to let a man treat you like that, even if you do get turned on by it.
Great start. Can't wait for more chapters on this story and see how Victoria's going to get through her two long weeks with someone as crazy as Nic.
it is as though you create this invisible web that pulls the reader inside of the story and soon feels like you are actually a part of what is happening. you are so talented!
You are awesome! This story is soooo to the left of damn dress. It borders on light bdsm. (which is good, to me lol) Im going to love this story just like the last one. First chapter already drawn in and cant wait to see what's next!!! Ps: I swear i wish i knew you, I would hug you!!
Have mercy that shit was hot! I love alpha man and he is bad boy. I like naive woman. They make the story more interesting.
Soular you are THE BEST most AWESOME writer...YOU GO GIRL!! Your stories rock!!!
Great first chapter! I can't wait to read more. Why do I think Victoria is going to end up with 2 more weeks in a very short time? She may be a "good" girl but she definitely doesn't sound like a pushover.
Pardon the pun. Off to a good start, Soular. It'll be interesting to see how this story plays out.
Love the start, can't wait to see where this story is going. Look forward to the next chapter.
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW THIS SOTRY IS AMAZING PLEASE UPDATEEEEEEE SOON I BEG YOU!!!!
Give this black woman some new stuff like a threesome with all Italian people let her get to eat some pussy some new stuff . Thanks for the story.
Oh Soular, you have done it again! I'm loving this story so far. My only hope is that recognizing that she basically is a "good" girl, he doesn't do anything really sick like pass her around to his men. This needs to remain just between the two of them whatever wild crap he does during the fourteen day.
Can't wait for chapter 2.
Sounds like we are in for another great story from you. Glad to see that.
Totally different from Damn Dress but it looks like it is going to be HOT HOT HOT!! I was thinking how is she going to top the last story I guess I got my answers. Loved it!!
this is shaping to be another great story. thank goodness you have the chapters ready to post right away because it would be torture to wait.
Oh God...bring sexy back, Soular! Nic is a jerk but damn hot...hope things get better between him and Vic! Great storyline. Don't keep us waiting for too long, girl! Keep rockin'!!! ~Selly
this is really good but i thought your next story was going to be about lori
I like it so far, and I'm not gonna make the same mistake this time. I'll make sure that I follow this series from the start! LOL. Good job. I love Italian guys. Looking forward to more... <3 Lillian, KR.
Hell yeah soular!! You know that good jirls love bad boys! The badder the better baby!! Thank you for this story it help to remind me of just how much I love Italian men. I have a business trip to Italy coming up soon....who know maybe I mix some pleasure in with it now!! Can't wait for your next chapter. Nic is yummy!! Princess
I think its a good start but surely given the context of the story should it not be in the nonconsent category?
Just a thought! You are as talented as ever and I am looking forward to Lori's story.
Very hot. Your two protagonists are fantastic, again. An interesting mix of confidence and insecurity, experience and innocence. Both conflicted. This is going to be so great!!!! Thanks for writing! I can only hope that the next chapter is already written and with your editor right now! I can't wait for Chapter 2!!!!!!!!!!
The book is very very hot and since I loved That Damn Dress, I love this one as well and hope there will be an Happy Ending for Nick and Victoria. read it if you are not shy,you will love it too.
I LOVE stories like this and can't wait for the next installment. Soular you never haven't disappointed me yet and it looks as if you will be adding another must read story to your bookshelf!!
Indy - Rabid fan girl in the making. LOL
Some people are saying to let him loan her to other people or to have a lesbian interlude... please don't. I think Nic will be (unexpectedly?) jealous at that concept and won't want to share her. Or so I hope. I agree with the other poster who said let him go as wild as he wants but keep it between Nic and Victoria.
That was so fucking SEXY! Damn. I have to day it one more time. Damn. Wherever you get your inspiration, keep it up!
Soular, you have done it again. This Nic is a piece of work, what a way for him to leave Victoria like that, he gets his pleasure and leaves her unfulfilled. He is such an alpha male but I hope he gets inflated really soon. He better keep this between the two of them. Cant wait for the next chapter.
well i can tell you new i loved it just reading the story i wish my husband was home right now so we could get it on!
I can't wait for more please asap! Thanks looking forward to the rest!
Very very good story line! I hope the plot will get better not deteriorate to where Nic will make her a common whore and punt her to everyone. Die hard romantic here you see! LOL. Good work. Now Let's pray for a good ending for little Vic
Freaking fantastic as always!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I love these characters...this is something new and I am loving it!! Keep them coming....literally!! LOL.
I'm starting to get that familiar feeling about this submission, the anticipation of this journey unfolding. It's an excellent start, I love how you grab the audience early in your stories and engage in the addiction we all have with waiting for the next chapter. Wonderful job soular and thanks for keeping me abreast via email.
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This is such a great story! It is so well written and I love how the storyline and details pull you in. Yet its so hot at the same time!
As many chapters as possible, please!
Looking forward to chapters 2, 3, 4, 5,....and more!
I love your other series with Brandon and Sienna and i am looking forward to reading this one.. Well written as usual
That was a hot chapter and I just know the future chapters will be just as hot. You have a talent, keep it up
this is a freaking hot story......love the alpha male routine... keep it up you have best seller written all over this story
FABULOUS- As usual! Keep it up chick, your writing is amazing. Please, please, please post the second chapter. PLEASE.
What an amazing start to this story. And as usual, I'm expecting nothing less than great writing. Excellent, Soular.
I really really liked this one. Hope it only gets better and please try not to draw out the scenes. It gets really frustarting for us the readers and even the characters themselves lol.Can't wait to read the next chapter
Soular, soular, soular!!
Where do I begin? There is a part of me that absolutely HATES Andretti! At the same time, there is a part of me that hopes she gets under his skin, makes him fall in utter LOVE with her, and then she leaves his ass desperate for her to love him back...you have another super, duper hit on your hands & I can't wait to see how it plays out. He was a fucking ASSHOLE to make her strip in front of his cronies!!!!
Once again you prove why you are my favorite author. I love the whole male in control thing, but I hope she leaves him whimpering and begging! I love the detail and layers you give the characters. I think it is just as important as all the juicy parts of your stories:) You are amazing and I hope you don't keep us waiting to long for Chapter 2!
It's going to be great fun watching Nic lose his heart to Victoria. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I loved your first series and I am curious to see how this one will end. When are you going to post the next chapter?
Whoa! you were'nt kidding about the dark part, huh?
I admit Im a little taken back by it, but since I consider myself a true fan of your work I will read on. As always your writting is inpeccable and the male in the story is wicked hot (wicked in all sense of the word). Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm curious to see how you're gonna turn this around for them.
Am sorry Soular.... I have to say this... I say we boycott this story until Victoria gets back together with Nick!!!
But then...We'll have to read the next instalment to find out!
You're amazing...keep it up girl!
i liked this...i was surprised because i didnt so much like the first series..maybe it was just me...but im likin this one. Your a good writer, keep it up!
for your follow-up effort to a great first story. You continue to impress with the blossoming of your talent.
It's a tall order, but this one may turn out to be even better than Damn Dress.
Not as good as you first story but I'm liking it and can't wait to read more.
both your stories have had unique interesting storylines, i love them both!
i am so excited to read this story, admittedly i checked the last sentence of the last chapter after reading this chapter because i was so turned on by this story that i didn't want to wait a month or so, now i'm sitting down right now to read the whole story!!!!!!!!! i feel soooooooo spoilt hehehe. Soular, thanks
Very well written. Great attention to detail. You wrote a real story which made the sex scene that much more satisfying when it came, so to speak, lol. Can't wait to read more!
This is really good and intresting. im sensing a sensitive underneath nic's hard exterior. i cant wait to find out more.
It is hard to categorise Nic but I was picturing him to look like Henry Cavill...yes I know Cavill is English but still....
on winning readers choice awards for this story...its one of my favs
Well, I never saw this coming. Good start thus far, I pray that Victoria gets a little more fight in her...
But I don't like Nic yet! Hopefully when his character is developed more in the other chapters, I will be converted!
I've read his entire story about 3 time ( this not included) & I love it; my first literptica story & my absolute hands-down favorite. it's perfect.
The story is well written and the characters sort of fascinating, but like all thugs, Nic deserves a shallow grave somewhere. There's no real way to make him redeemable. He's a crook, therefore he's crap. I know it won't happen, but I'd like to see Victoria arrange a bullet in his brain by the end.
Soular, I read your stories last year and wow, just wow, while all your leading men aren't the traditional, you took your readers on a great journey. I was apprehensive about Nic but whew, W H E W, this was a well done story. HOT and sexy pair. And the way you developed the lead character was fantastic. Do you read me :-) fantastic! Keep up the fantastic work.
I don't know what the choking is about...kind of creepy really!! But great story thus far.
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Can we just take a moment to talk about who this is the best story in this site. Hands down!
That's pretty much it. Nic and Victoria are an addiction!
I read this story so many times i lost count and i still can't get enough of it
How much I LOVE ❤ this story ... Second time around and yeah... I'm addicted. You know a story is bomb when you think about it a lot. God bless you, soular !!!
I read Damn Dress and enjoyed it very much. I can see I'll not be disappointed with your second. Thanks.
I read your story years ago, and I just totally forgot the name of it! Now I finally found it and I'm gonna read it again! I remember the first time I read this story I stayed up till 4am because I just had to finish it! I love it so much!
Your story is one of the best on here. I have read it multiple times and it never gets old. Great story
I second that...... I really waiting on Sonny’s story!!!! I would pay for that ebook
Holy crap! When he had her pull her dress off in his office, I actually cried as if it were me. How he was treating her. I understand he's a mobster/gangster, but she's doing this for her family. I could only imagine she would feel like she would never be able to face her family with dignity. Most families would be like "We could find other ways, but we would NEVER have you do THAT!" And he takes advantage and treats her like a prostitute. That hurt me so bad! Wow, this is good writing!
this is like my 30th time reading this great book. you really outdid yourself with this masterpiece!
I found this story (novel!) years ago and have read it so many times since. You have true talent. This story takes you on a journey with the characters and everything unfolds and develops masterfully. I have read all of your work and have thoroughly enjoyed all of them, but this is by far my favorite (Damn Dress is a close second). If you haven't already, from one writer to another, I would strongly encourage you to publish this or any of your other work because there are definately people like me who would eat it up. Your skill outshines many authors I have read on Amazon or elsewhere. I hope that wherever you are that you are well and still writing. Thank you for sharing your work with us!!
Like your other fans, I have read this so many times! Recently been going through a really rough time I came back to this story. I'm in love with Nick I think. Such an alpha. I could use a Nick in my life about now.
Thank you so soular for this wonderful story and also for your other stories as well. You are doing a great job, keep it up. I really appreciate all the time and effort you put into writing this novel. I've read this story so many times I can easily narrate what happens from chapters to chapters. Thanks.
Fell in love with this story and the characters years ago and found myself coming back after I saw 365 DNI on Netflix. THIS is the story that needs to be made into a movie. Literotica at its best.
I honest to God hope that you are still alive. Please, be well. You don't need to finish the story now, just lwt us know that you are still breathing. Please