All Comments on 'Sex, Cheating and Romance Ch. 06'

Great story. Really enjoyed it. Thanks.

Thanks for a well written story.

Wow, knock me down. Love your stories, and the O'Henry twist just floored me. Thank you and keep up the good work.

Entertaining. I would have preferred that it had been posted all at once, but you warned me and I still could not put it on hold until it was all up there!

Many thanks to DG Hear.

Thank you DG Hear it is an excellent consequence story. I wrote it many times the modern biology new results in the brain research the true love is a being state in our brain. The true love can rewrite the brain working and our sexual behavioral. Two person with true love with each other are better parents for their children...............

The ending was really good. It was kind of easy to figure out but good nontheless. I look forward to your next stories.

Great story. Great writer. great character development. Surprise ending. Keeep writing. Thank you.

. . . . integrity and flat out honesty. Pure loving sister is responsible for the death of her slut sister. As pentance she has to marry the sister's husband and adopt and mother sister's daughter. The way DG has exposed morality, even the limits of morality to deal with an impossible set of facts, is unique to the offerings here on Literotica or other erotic platforms I have read.

This has been an incredibly powerful story. I wondered about the six very short chapters as I was reading each day, but at the end I can see the spacing added to the impact of this final chapter. Sex, Cheating and Romance, along with Rehnquist's work are worthy of a higher score than FIVE.

I wanted to thank you for writing a great story to read. As you know there is alot of garbage on this site. Its nice to read a story with real characters, plot and human emotion and not a bunch of sexual automatons. It proves that a story can have a plot and still be erotic. Thanks again

the world shines brighter. Lessons learned. TK U MLJ LV NV

i had a feeling it was olivia, accident or not she had the most to gain.

on another note, your editor needs to look a little closer. i seen several minor mistakes.

The fact is you wrote a complete story...sad but I guess it a complete tale of a slice of life.....he may have got the best of the two sisters but God Almighty how could you live with the knowledge?

Wow, what a VERY finely parsed situation. Sheila was a nasty cheating bitch. She mocked her marriage and arranged to get her sister raped. Death is always a harsh sentence, even for a bitch like this. When it's from something like AIDS it seems like "Hand of God" Divine justice. In this case, it's not quite as clear. DG Hear parses it even finer. Olivia didn't intentionally kill Sheila. It was an accident. But Olivia avoids responsibility for what she did. That takes the sheen off the justice. It makes it an "end justifies the means" story, always a murky proposition. If you met Adolf Hitler at 12 and KNEW that he was to become, would you murder him to prevent it? Interesting.

Randy is also an interesting character. He a strong male and no one's fool. But he falls in love and is cruelly used by Sheila even though he doesn't know it. After the fact, his slut wife and Carlos are dead and he can seek no revenge against them. He only can go after the one other biker. It's a frustrating situation for him and yet he accepts his responsibility as a father and moves on.

Very well presented story.

Very original, which is difficult to accomplish. The only drawback were some errors in grammer. You wrote, "Vicky was in for her nap and I made Olivia and I a screwdriver and we sat at the kitchen table". It should have read, "Vicky was in for her nap and I made Olivia and myself a screwdriver. We proceeded to sit at the kitchen table."

There were a couple of more, but I'm not complaining, I'm trying to be constructive. Hope that helps.

Another of your good ones. Thank you

As usual. A great well written, well thought out story. This gave me a lot to think about.

And a good twist, I didn't supect her, but I probably should have.

Thanks for sharing.

This was really the only way this could end...you wrote it well.

All 6 chapters were on the storyline and as always well written..

Waiting for the next one......Don

well written and gave it a 4. the sister was the obvious choice and the husband was out of character.

There are a few good authors one this site who are consistently good. Any list of the best authors on this site would have to have DG either at the top, or damned close to it! FIVE STARS IS NOT EVEN ADEQUATE AS A RATING FOR THIS ONE.

Thank you a lot for a very good story, Amigo.

worthy effort but in my opinion much too wordy 6 chapters for 4 max.

Killing Sheila was an accident! No sense in getting the cops involved. Cops always feel the need to blame and/or arrest somebody, even for an accidental death. So acting all guilty over the accidental death of somebody who's just wasting oxygen seems more than a little pious and phoney. Everybody's glad the slut's dead, but are just too chicken shit to admit it. They're all good little Christians after all, and they know that they can do what ever they want, since they'll be forgiven on Sunday. Any annual visitations to the dead sluts grave should only be for the purpose of urination. Ending was a bit weak and I was tempted to give you only four stars, but I expect in the interests of "good taste" and "political correctness" some sort of attempt at remorse for the deceased slut needs to be expressed.

Thanks for the read .... waiting for your next story.

I cheated on this one. Rather than read each installment, I waited and read them in their entirety. The story was fantastic. I found Randy's character to be particularly fascinating. He came up hard and lived hard, yet time and circumstances revealed a tender and loving side to him. He could just as easily have been a hardened cold criminal type with few redeeming qualities. I've always enjoyed characters in fiction that have a certain duality about them. Another fascinating character play is the polar opposite personalities of Olivia and Sheila. These women seem to represent the struggle of good against evil. Both seem to be almost caricatures of the type in fact. What is so complex in this story is that we see good prevail, yet good must embrace some small degree of darkness to achieve that goal.

The author has entertained me not a few times. The work of this author has always been appealing to me, but I would dare say that this particular offering has been, to my estimation at least, the best yet. I proudly gave it five stars, which I reserve only for the best of stories. Great work and congratulations to a talented and gifted wordsmith!

the whore is dead, the husband got what he deserved a loving wife with a kids and all, mother in law that relized her daughter was a slut. top 10 of all time

Another outstanding story by an excellent author.

I do enjoy your writing, the twist in the tail was most enjoyable!

The Restaurant where they ate changed from Olive Garbage, I mean Garden to Red Lobster.

I didn't see that coming. I really thought it was going to be Carol but I wouldn't change a thing. Thanks for this one.

I would think the police would have been more aggresive. Being totaly stupid drunk might have helped the police let it go? I don't know. But very good read. 5

bill

Enjoyable read.

The roadrunner killed the coyote Beep Beep...a dead abusive cheater in today's STD ridden world is just self defense.

Thanks for the offering.

and for those who believe nothing is improbable, TK U MLJ LV NV

Great ending to a great series. I thought it might be Olivia, and I'm glad it worked out for her. Sheila was.nothing but a whore and doesn't even deserve the cemetery visits. Really greatnwork.

It’s always the decent guy who gets screwed over. I enjoyed the series. It seemed that Olivia was too smart to make a mistake like taking the keys, didn’t suspect her until she had a key. I expected it was either Sharon or Ray driving the truck; that it was deliberate; and that they lied. I really didn’t expect the issue resolved at the end.

This guy doesn't deserve an happy ending,he knew Sheila was a slut ,but still married her.He deserved to be hurt.

Happy ending to a story about a whore and the good sister who cleaned the world up a little.

And it is also a happy ending for the readers. Thx

5*

BJ

Definitely didn't see that ending coming. That makes me a little happier with the series overall since the surprise ending kinda balances out the fact that Sheila's cheating was obvious way before it was ever revealed.

Olivia was involved in an unintentional accident which her caused her evil sisters death. She and her husband sould feel no guilt. Fact is, it was fortunate accident for everyone involved.