All Comments on 'Sex with My Sister'

He,She? Figure out who’s who, not worth my time to read

I think English is not your first language.

very bad english, and the author has no idea how to build sex sequence...

Looking at pictures and fisting every day after they put the book in his bag. That escalated quickly!

No offense, but this was awful. Your English hasn’t improved enough for you to write a story like this, it’d be better if you used your native language. Also… in what world would you casually use the word negro to refer to black people? Study English language AND culture more before attempting to write again. Hopefully you’ll get better one day