All Comments on 'Sexy Sarah Strips'

Nice descriptive writing, but the story has no character identification. I knew everything about the bar and nothing about the main character.

I loved the story and I can see where the previous writer is coming from but I would have said that Sarah's charcter is that of a sex crazed nymphomaniac - liked the twist at the end too.

Great story Cloud. I just love your work. Sublinda

Your writing gives excellant detail. Keep it up!