by Sir_Nathan
...my completely unbiased, honest, and impartial opinion (laughs...um...perhaps not all of those) is that there should be a warning posted above the story stating 'Don't forget a damp towel and the smelling salts...because you're going to need them'
so...so...so sexy
It's sexy, fun, insightful, and in every way just TOO DAMN SHORT! Hurry up with more, or you may make me beg...lol
--Bitch
moans softly...oh this is the most delectable chapter yet. i can't wait for more!
And thank You for letting me know the chapter was here!
emerald
What a little teaser of a story! Don't stop now! You have a very relaxed and enthusiastic way of writing that makes the story so enjoyable to read! Keep going, WT
excellent!!! Keep her on the move ...and guessing...loved the game.
v. passion
I'm pulsing with interest ... feeling her trepidation, and her excitement rolled together ... a skillfully written story that teases so .. Thank you for publishing
MMMmmmmmm
Green
i can barely resist reading the next chapter right now but i've been told i have to wait until later. Waiting is going to be agony.