All Comments on 'Sharing Sisters'

The story was pretty good, but the narrator-to-reader asides distracted from the scene. We don't need to be told how great the situation, if you've written the story well, that will naturally come thru.

Keep up the work

I'll try not to sidetrack you so much

;)

was good man real good

that story was brilliant keep up the good work!

short, sweet, some meandering but it seemed to off set the actual tale just right in my opinion

Really nice story. I liked the moral in the end so true but not always practiced.

Len

Omg Brett, what would I not give to enjoy a set of female twin nymphomaniacs like this. Nearly sucked and fucked myself to death with my two live in fuck buddies, when we read this story. We keep doing each other till we pass out from the insane levels of sexual pleasure and or exhaustion. Absolutely fabulous, I absolutely adore cunt. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.