All Comments on 'Shower Monster'

by luckybaldrik

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

What a ride . short but well done

dawphillipsdawphillipsover 6 years ago
shampoo

good story would love to find that shampoo

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ministrations, not menstruations

Those are really, REALLY different things. Other than that, a really fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

OMG hadme going the whole time

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Your shampoo fucked you? Okay...

At which point am I supposed to get a boner? We're all desperate for "shemale fucks guy" stories but I'm not this desperate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
All I can say is...

luckybaldrik

The story don't stick

your stupid-ass premise

really sucks donkey dick!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
eh

not really feeling it. maybe this belongs in another category..

titans2138titans2138over 6 years ago
You can do better...

My tumescence monitor was stuck at zero while reading this story. Your step-sister passes the test though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Goooooooood

Enjoyed it very much, some speech would have been cool but that was still rad

aspiringdevilaspiringdevilover 6 years ago
pretty good

I never get tired of monster dick girls. Good premise solid writing I look forward to your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I think you meant "ministrations", not "menstruations".

Learn the difference, it could save your life.

OblimoOblimoabout 6 years ago

Strawberry Banana says “Hey!”

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Dreams

I had a similar dream to this a few years back.... Which was based on something I saw.

Benzguy280Benzguy280almost 6 years ago
Shampoo

Good story, always love monsters with tentacles. Where can I get this shampoo?

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaalmost 5 years ago
Loved it

I wish i was him

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 4 years ago
Gooey Futa Girl

Oh shit but was this story HOT or what?.I mean to have a Girl form out of shampoo gel and grow a cock to fuck the guy in his ass and mouth is just some kinky shit.I hope the guy keeps that shampoo and they continue and become b/f & g/f so they can give each other their cum and goo.

Talon679Talon679over 3 years ago
Wow...

That was actually pretty fucking hot. Hope there is more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Cool story just one thing ...i think you ment ministrations instead of menstruations?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Almost like a Goo Girl from Corruption of Champions...

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

11/10 Slime Dicks!!!!!

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