All Comments on 'Silver Arrow Ch. 10-12'

Appears to have been released out of sequence

It seems that chapters 7-9 didnt get posted.

Go to 5-6 and the link to 7-9 is at the end under also in this series.

waiting for tomnce with christine

waiting for the connection between paul and diane death...

The chapters were probably posted correctly but online'd out of order but they are all there now. Sometimes when an author submits multiple chapters in one day/night, when the database updates, the sometimes post out of order. For a site such as this that doesn't have a huge budget because it's free, it can be tough to have things perfect every time if you don't have a full time tech running your servers.

I cannot imagine any solution other than that Denise was a submissive and that Paul

took advantage of her.

In the first chapters, he says that upon divorce, Diane moved to Kentucky for a job. Then he learned that she was self employed. So why’d she really move? Did she really divorce him over getting fat? Surprised that Doug never questioned why she moved hundreds of miles, to work from her home.

Awful. The story is so obviously intentionally stretched it's not even funny!

"Hey, the police sent your wife's secret files as well. Maybe you should take a look at them!" <ignores>

"Wow, what a coincidence! This pos is about to tell something revealing and I'm right here to hear it!" <leaves>

Meanwhile, pages and pages of irrelevant trivia.