by geronimo_appleby
To surprise me, but always keeps me reading to the end!! What a read!!
Yes, the punctuation was a bit off (the new Microsoft Word corrects that) but the story had heat and ended where one would want it to end! Good stuff!
Liked the way the story jumped ahead in time several places, different than most of the stories here, but good. The sex was very graphic and intense but not beyond belief. A very good read, thanks.
Jesus, that's about a delusional fantasy for chronic masterbaters that can't get laid in real life