All Comments on 'Something in the Water Pt. 05'

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I really loved the ending with susie, thank you for empowering at least one woman against this whole force of nature\urge to mate thing. The sex scenes are well written and the husbands are incredibly boring,bland and dont attend to their wives needs. Well done *claps* was a great read thank you

... I really liked how this chapter ended. Finally Roy knocked back a pace.

Excellent series so for. Thank you for your incredible work.

James aka FinalStand

Loved the ending. Hoping the other boys beat the cockyness out of Roy soon

Am I having a flashback or are some words in the color blue.If so for what purpose.

Incredibly hot series. Normally I don't have the patience to go through a long series. The sex , after a while, seems to get monotonous. But this series of yours is one of the best I have read. Every chapter, every page keeps the sex boiling. Love it. But I'm a little confused at the ending. Roy, with his sweat pheromones and big cock, seems to get his way with all the women. But how does Susy Lannit not get effected? You should give a reason for that. In fact I was a little disappointed because she, being the most beautiful, voluptuous and hottest of the women in Portsmith, I was expecting a real hot tryst with Roy. Oh, well, maybe another time.