All Comments on 'Something in the Water Pt. 08'

I've finished Chapters 9 - 13. I post each of my chapters on Literotica three weeks apart.

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Thanks for reading!

i'm glad someone got off the dime and posted the new chapter...

I love forward to every Chapter... need to get ahead of it and donate!!!

Pat needs to creampie Donna in the library for the win.

I would love to see this series, The Dark Stone, and The Haunting of Palmer Mansion continue until they reach the end of their respective adventures.

Just keep on with this very erotic sexy story. Outstanding writing and thinking.

Did any couple conceive already?

Why did Patrick listen to Donna's warning to not cum in her? They fucked the whole night through. He should have disregarded her warning and spunked in her once or twice. She was so far gone, she wouldn't have stopped him. After all the ultimate purpose of Axcix was to impregnate every woman in Portsmith.