by milf26
I just love this story and all of your other stories. Your stories make love feel good and not so dirty !! I just love it . Keep up the good work !!!
A very sweet story! The tale (no pun intended) sometimes verges on sentimentality, but always displays a centered, articulate voice. The writing??in terms of craft??is very sure-handed, and strong.
Well, this is actually not so much an erotic story as it is a rather tender and romantic one. But, then, tenderness, longing, and desire are very, very sexy indeed. So, I give this my highest rating for making tenderness and longing very erotic??and I'm a guy!
By the way, the story depicts a very sensitive, intelligent, and very self-aware heroine who despite being very attractive, is somewhat diffident . Is this because she is African-American in a largely White setting? Or is it just another facet of her sharp intelligence and striking sensitivity? Whatever the case, as a bloke I have to envy Sean; he seems to have fallen in love (that four letter word) with a real gem.
So, Sean, Doode, seeing that you somehow managed to find this lovely woman, keep in mind what the great French author, Marcel Proust ("Le Recherche du Temps Perdu" )would've said:
Doode. KEEP IT REAL
very sweet and romantic!! I liked it.
I loved this story and I hope there is a continuation of it as well. Wow!
Loved this story. There should definitely be a continuation. Lizzie should get whats coming to her. Please continue.
I'm disappointed that this story ended. ;-) Girl, you are a truly gifted writer and I will be very upset if there is no part two.
For writing a very good, emotionally stimulating story about an adoring couple. For once the leading black lady doesn't have fictional 38FFF breasts...my goodness, just thank you for not mentioning breast size at all. This is one of very, very few interracial stories that actually has a plot, and is realistic, and sexy all in one.
You are a great writer that has a wonderful perspective on your characters.
I've read all of your stories and look forward to more.
Sorority pledge weeks can be bell, but you made what they all really want. Affection, gentle good sex with a promising future. Thank you!
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