All Comments on 'Step Sister's Prank Ch. 05'

Senior Trip is your best story and you were too lame to finish it. Why is that?

At the foot of page 1 'he' is talking to 'Jenny' whilst at the window.

By the start of page 2 it is 'Tammy' that he is talking to!

No mention of 'her' changing her name!

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He know dad has had the ‘snip’. And I don’t ever remember mom mentioning having her tubes tied, and she would have no need for birth control since her husband had the ‘snip’. So can we hope to see her, and possibly the neighbor turn up pregnant very soon?

This was pretty good. I hope this was not the end. Their are parts of your story line you could wrap up, the neighbor, x girlfriend , strip/pole dancing lesson ,etc.... Also thank you for a wonderful story.

Awesome story, a good place to end it if that's what you were trying for.

It can be a little hard keeping all the characters in their place, not sure if adding more is a good thing. Please keep the characters names straight, Tammy should not become Jenny (2x) in this chapter, that adds to the confusion lol.

Otherwise a very good story of a blended family with a closet full of skeletons now seeing the light of day.

Cheers, Andy ( not to be confused with the lead character :) )

Some confusion with the characters (agree that more don't need to be added) but hot story. Particularly love the mom's reactions and sex scenes. You can almost hear her cumming.

Please don't end this story here, there is so much more to this story. Ten stars!!!

It was good until the dad got involved. Would have been fine if he didn't touch Tammy or younger girls, and he and the mom went off on their own, to do their own thing.

The secret was out, now it could go on forever. Nothing I hate more than reading 80 chapters where Mc didn't get to fuck the main girl. You diverted, good read, very good read..

last anonymous: diverted => delivert, stupid autocorrect.

To de anonymous complaining about the dad, what should he do? Die like in most stories? I think it was done okay...

This can’t just end here ,, to many loose ends hanging

I think we got some naming problems jenny comes visiting him, sees him watching his neighbour, say's we have to tell mom, and then he starts fucking tammy.

So probably first jenny should have been tammy to start with.

Kinda weird story...the way the secrets were in the way like that, then Andy has to keep them also...

Erin, and mom Amanda(?)...there was a real surprise, with an invitation from mom, to come have an 'adult play date's...WWWWOOOOOOWWWW...the fun continues...

I also would like another FIVE**55**STAR CHAPTER LIKE THAT!!! I am going to check out other stories you have posted...

(7/24/2023) Seems Tammy has been demoted. I’m disappointed with Jenny displacing her as Andy’s love interest and I was a bit put off by Tom doing Tammy. I didn’t see their relationship as temporary. I was hoping for a romantic happily ever after for them with the inclusion of the other ladies in a quasi-harem. I liked that Elaine never cheated on Tom outside the house and that they were able to reconcile their sexual predilections and stayed together. Still, I gave each chapter five stars and I’m hoping for a chapter six cumming soon. Thank you for submitting this series.

Would like to see another chapter with the strip show!!

Enjoyed the series, but I support the earlier comment about your lack of name control.

Not only Tammy becoming Jenny, but Andy got a change to Adam, and many other errors beside.

Do all your future readers a kindness by editing out all your errors, right from the beginning, and reposting the corrected script.

You left so many open ended relationships and probabilities that there has to be more chapters.

Twice you used Jenny's name instead of Tammy. Things like that really distract me.

I enjoyed the story a lot.

I really loved it Great

when is the next part?!