All Comments on 'Stephen's Ride to Heaven'

Layla,

Naughty and nice. Interesting and very flattering for old men to rise to the occasion. Some journalism style in places that for me delayed progress and continuation.

Thanks for a good story.

Thank you for the kind words ... and critique ... I'm sure I know exactly where progress may have been halted ... I'm smiling ... I have a pendence for including a personal reflection of societal acceptences or the lack thereof. Perhaps I should refrain from my stance on a soap box ... and remain comfortably in the arms of my chactacter ... although ... Layla has definite ideas of what is and isn't acceptable. Please feel free to voice your opinion ... it's the thoughts of my readers that means so very much to me on all levels ... Warm regards, Layla

Looking forward to see Layla get the spanking from Stephen or even rough play