All Comments on 'Stormy Weather'

Ashon, you are a good writer, but lacking imagination... every story is about the same as the previous..... different words, local, people - the same old story line.... please try a different genre.......

... one of your best.

Also

1) "I just jumped the fence I was standing next to and made a beeline for the house and that lovely sheltered veranda."

At least in UK "the house" means "my house" when there hasn't been a reference to any other earlier.

2) With her pants full of fresh cream, and looking slightly flushed, one wonders just HOW she was going to resolve her dilemma: "I wondered what I should say to my husband."

Shower works when she gets home...

The house here (North America) means "the house"

and my house means "my house".

One of your better stories. Actually erotic. Descriptive.Enjoyable to read. British humor. No female could be that naïve [sp ?]

I hate stories where the woman is just a complete fucking idiot, so stupid.

I must say I really enjoined the story, This is the first story of yours i have seen two male's I must say it was quite good.

Because of your writing i have started to spank my love and now she loves it thank you .

It's a strange t-shirt that buttons down the front.