by Boxlicker101
I like a nice sweet story. I found yours to be quite erotic. I'm also glad that a heroine doesn't have to be model-thing to be hot. All in all, I'd say a night with Audrey would be a dream come true.
What a nice story! Two people clearly enjoying one another, and having pleasure just for the sake of having pleasure! I really liked this story! Well done!
Great storyline and very beleivable. Was so erotic and wanna hear more about these two and their next adventure!
Great story and I hope you give us a sample of the next "mature" meeting.
I loved this story and would really like to see these two characters have more interactions in more stories.
I loved this story and would love to read about the couple's future adventures!
I really enjoyed this story a lot, especially the May/December affair. I would very much like to see what future encounters Ben and Audrey have together.
This is the best capture of my own experiences I have EVER read. The author is in control of the link between mind and senses. He weaves your mind through the detailed paths of his experiences with clarity and simplicity. I could smell the aroma of Audrey's pussy juices, I could see her wet hole between her inner lips. Wonderful reading, congratulations.