All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 05'

Every night, before I go to bed, I check for new titles from you since you've started writing again, and when I see the little yellow 'n' I get so excited! Its like an orgasmic little bedtime treat!

Looking forward to seeing more from you. So awsome to see one of my favorite Lit writers posting more completely awsome erotica. :D

Its hilarious seeing how many people jump on this story the second it comes out. I think its a sign you need to publish, don't you think? Thanks for at last continuing this one. I hope to see more soon, as does the rest of your following. LOL.

This story is an absolute delight! Looking foward to reading more please!

Amazing! I keep looking to see if you have written more all the time :)

I absolutely love this story, am mad that i missed it on the day this chapter came out as I had been looking every day! The characters are wonderful and I can't wait to read when/if she disobeys! I hope Alanna is strong once she has found her feet, it would be exciting if for some reason she escaped as I think David might have been enslaved as much as she.

This chapter was incredible. The end especially so.

I have really enjoyed reading this story so far, as i have always been interested in Dom/Sub relationships. I like the Dom in this story. For me, the end line by Alanna, made this chapter.

I hate the political stereotyping even if just in jest. Is this what a Democrat's idea of women's rights are? "This is my pussy", her owner says. What about the "my body, my choice" rallying cry? Just shows me the hypocrisy on the left. Interesting, they prefer us to their own women.

this chapter was great, I need to agree with fmhp, the end line by Alanna made the stoy

I like the face that David doesn't seem to a "hungry animal" ( you know what I mean) that he seem to care about her, but still be able to dom

I will of corse read the other capters too,

keep up the good work!

A joy to read

So hot 🔥