All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 08'

... I often find myself wondering just how easy it would be to fall asleep so quickly from such a sexual 'high' as the characters in stories like this one so easily achieve.

That aside, this is a fine story - five stars and thank you; I look forward to even more of it.

I personally - if I'm really tired beforehand - will fall asleep immediately following strenuous sexual activity. And she's had a rather long day. Granted, I realize not everyone's body works the same way, but I do have a tendency to rely on my own body's reactions for my characters =) But I will def keep your comment in mind for the future! Thanks!

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I love your characters and Alanna's progression in education is really sensuously writtern.

As to the falling asleep - I agree with you. After strenuous sexual activity I also tend to fall asleep quite quickly.

I find that if it's a really powerful orgasm, that I usually have one of two reactions. One, I get wired up and need to do something. Walk, eat, clean, something. Usually more sex is my choice. Then, there is the one that happens after a string of really good orgasms where I fall asleep, usually right after. My body is so relaxed, so sated that I can barely keep my eyes open. If given half the chance, I'll be asleep within minutes. So, yes, it's possibly to fall asleep like Alanna did. Especially since she's been thrown into a new lifestyle (Which is draining), forced to adjust to someone elses expectations at their pace (which is exhausting), on top of almost continuous orgasms/sex. She's probably a very worn out girl at the end of the day.