by MinxDark
One of the reasons I'm following this story is that it's actually believable. Bill has a real conflict here, he's trying to do the right thing, it's tough. But then he somehow threads the needle and gets to have some hot action with Kara. But! This can't be the last bump in the road, can it? I'm staying tuned!
That your great work is not spread out onto 3-4 pages so that, for this reader, there is greater continuity.
I’m glad you’re taking the story slowly and giving her the pleasure she deserves to understand for the first time. I always love to hear the thoughts and feeling from the woman’s point of view. Thanks for this sweet story of her sexual education.