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I started thinking about Elly when I was back in the car. I remembered our earlier conversation and mulled over the points Elly made as I drove. She was dead on with many things and it gave me lots to think about. I still wasn't sure of my full feelings about her, the boys, and the land. I could feel my mind trying to find ways to make it work. Even the guilt I felt for having sex with Marcie returned.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoStory is great! I understand this chapter was for developing the story. Thank you!
Aussie1951almost 4 years agoChapter 1 was great, working up to a beautiful romance story. I was disappointed with change of direction this story went in this chapter. I can understand his apprehension but fucking his way out of it. Really. I certain hope he gets is act together in the next chapter...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI'm disappointed this is not a Romance. It's a guy screwing multiple women.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoI thought this was supposed to be romantic? First chapters were building fairly well, and then this. In a romance you need to develop the emotional relationship between Jack and Elly, if he is screwing around then fine, ok, I understand they really don't have a defined relationship yet. But no reason to expand on those occurrences just so you can add sex to the chapter. We need to read about the ROMANCE, be it emotional or physical, between the main characters.
