All Comments on 'Surprise Visitor'

by Ashson

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babyjane12084babyjane12084about 6 years ago

It was ok. The use of some of you high dollar words was a little much.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Taking Charge

I grew up in a time when every decent girl expected you to take charge. They didn’t want to be thought of as being easy. They would call you a low life scoundrel while humping the hell out of you; cumming like an over flowing volcano! Growing up in the sixties was great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I really loved the cheeky attitude of your characters, fun read!

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