All Comments on 'Taking My Sister Ch. 02'

This is undoubtedly the best story that I have had the pleasure , and I mean PLEASURE, of reading!! I would love to meet a girl that would do all that with me!! I do hope you will find it in your heart to write more of this story!!

I love sibling incest stories and yours are some of the best.

Keep them coming. Thanks for sharing your very real talent.

another year and a half for another chapter in this series. Keep it going.

You have to write more. this is the best story i have read in a really really long time

WOW WOW WOW, I THINK THAT SAYS IT ALL....VERY FUCKING HOT; THIS WOULD MAKE A FUCKING HOT ASS XXX MOVIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is greeat but I need more when can you get Ch 3 and 4 and 5...get the idea. We need MORE! of these two. Please keep it going.

Please write more!! Awesome.

Well written and nice!!! Keep going

moar nao

Any chance of getting a continuation?

Yes please continue. Both chapters were great!

Guess you had to write how Rachel turned into the aggressor and initiator so it was alright in the end, after having her raped almost constantly by her rat-fuck brother in the first part of this miserable crap-fest; this part is just contrived and has no connection to the first part, and you need a swift kick in the ass for backpedalling so drastically after writing such a horrendous first chapter, just so readers will think you're somehow a good guy, and not the sack of shit who got off by writing such a horrible rape and bullying story.

This is really a fun read. Hope you write some more soon.

Hell, he wouldn't have to guess the rhythm of the dildo, it would be pushing hard against the bottom of his cock through the thin lining between them! Hehe.

Loved the second chapter though, the first had moments but scored too high on my rape-y scale to enjoy it.

Anyway, glad to see sis has owned it and owned his ass now, lol!

Need more

is there possibly going to be a 3rd chapter? one where their mom catches them in the act and joins in?

Great story. Too bad it ended. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Cousin from overseas teams with Ben to turn Rachel into the meat of a slut sandwich.

Good premise continues.

But erotic? Not.

Just wham!

Two stars.

I realize that this is fiction. But you still shouldn't write about a girl sucking on a dick right after it fucked her ass. Not only is it disgusting and disturbing, but in the real world it's extremely unsanitary and can cause life threatening illness. This could have been a great story if you hadn’t gone down that road. 1/5

I loved it. I gave both parts 5/5 stars.