All Comments on 'Taking the Babysitter'

by Flynhghr

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
good try

this story has a lot of potential and I see you have some ability as a writer though you need to work on building your story and your charaters which could be done n sequels of this story

gaggedKitty23gaggedKitty23almost 10 years ago
Good

Good first story. Liked the story concept you used.

Miss_JenniMiss_Jennialmost 10 years ago
5 stars

Short but very sweet 😃

peebudypeebudyalmost 10 years ago
loved it

love n/c and sitter stories and this one nicely combined the two. well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not even gonna finish

Got about 2 minutes in and bailed. The poor grammar and writing was so distracting, I just wasn't enjoying the story at all.

rafsrafsover 3 years ago

Hot - very hot.

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