All Comments on 'Tanning Voyeur'

Too cliche, repetitive & amateur. Everyone cumming simultaneously & repeatedly. Also, if you sit on the edge of a round table, it will tip over.

Get an editor and some variety and you could be OK.

Stupid ending, and not exactly justice, since the punishment will not fit the crime, the promise of forcing him to be with men in the future was pretty over the top

Jack being able to get hard, much less ejaculate, repeatedly in such a short time is beyond my belief. Twice in an evening, maybe, more than that even in his mind thirties, I just don't believe it.

ridiculous

The last man a woman who's been violated wants to fuck is the violator.

I can't believe you ended it like you did. This ending makes this story so far fetched, it doesn't even come close to all the good stories you wrote.