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xpressherxpressherover 6 years ago

....And I will raise your 1 and make it a 5.

kateysummers99kateysummers99over 4 years ago
Love the tension build up

I really like the way the tension builds up in this story. The characters go on their own journey and change from the beginning to start, and its paced well.

MadJustinMadJustinalmost 3 years ago

That was really hot. The Paragraphs were she's swimming and the boys are starting to realize what she's offering are pure gold.

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