by loveking
One of the best stories. Would love to see Jocelyn in trouble at school again
Your stories are very very good. I loved especially the part with Jack and Tom.
This would have been 5 except for the pissing.
Hi, I really loved your story,found on a search,I appreciate it is 3 years old now but I had to say the only thing that would improve it,in my humble opinion, is if if could have been posted in the illustrated section. Photo's of your characters in humiliating positions/acts would have been "most excellent" as Bill and Ted would say.
Graham UK