All Comments on 'Temporary Girlfriend Ch. 04'

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marklionmarklionover 15 years ago
The Story Keeps on Getting Better!!!!!

I don't know how you do it is the story is gotten better again. I hope that you keep by developing the characters so that Josh and Megan become permanent together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
THIS IS SAD

I'm ready to start the final chapter. I know it will be as good if not better than the first four chapters. I'm sad that there will not be any more chapters. Please continue writing. You are the best

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Change of personality

Yeah, I know it's only a story...but our heroine has a complete change of personality from having no self esteem from being put down by a previous boyfriend to a genuine femme fatale who has no problems taking the lead in a threesome..and all in a week !!

sqheadgermansqheadgermanalmost 12 years ago
A GR8 Polamory story

Josh and his sister Fiona, just married They had been in LOVE for decades. There first time is on her honeymoon. Fiona and Ray are married and they are a 3 they both love Stacy - THAT A POLY family life style story. A great writer, a great story sqhead

IrishchapIrishchapover 8 years ago

The feeling of closeness and family is overwhelming I would love to be part of this family.

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