All Comments on 'Temporary Girlfriend: Christmas Holidays Ch. 01'

by Romantic1

Sort by:

Newest First Oldest First

5 Comments

Anonymousover 15 years ago

Outstanding !!

Bob,

A story up to your usual high standards. Very well handled.

Anonymousover 15 years ago

one more red H

Easy to see why all but one of your stories has a red H. How did that one miss? Look forward to the next chapter!

marklion over 15 years ago

You Did It Again!!!!!!

You start another good series off with the first chapter. It's nice to see that you give us more details about what has happened between the wedding and now. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Anonymousover 15 years ago

JUST FANTASTIC

You are an amazing writer. As I finish reading the first chapter, I'm anticipating what I will read in the next chapter. Keep writing.

Captain Midnight over 15 years ago

Who is the father?

Great story, but I wonder about Stacy. From evidence in this story and others, it looks like she became pregnant during the wedding and honeymoon. And she made it with several different guys. So if her daughter has something genetically wrong with her, what would happen?

Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ

Post as:

Anonymous