All Comments on 'Terran's World Ch. 01'
by Daniellekitten
- 14 Comments
GlosUKover 14 years agoIt is certainly different, will read more chapters if you write them, but as yet it isn't in my 'eager for more' list. PJ xx
Morrigan_over 14 years agoThis is different but very sexy:) I am looking forward to chapter 2. Terran and Miara are so sweet - keep them together:)
MadLimeyover 14 years agoI loved it, it is a bit diffrent from your usual submissions, but i think that this will end up being one of your best. Im sold, i would love to have another chapter
cantfightfateover 14 years agoI was repulsed at the beginning and only mildly disgusted by the end. It was much better than I expected it to be but I don't think I would read another chapter of this. Thank you for writing, though.
Anonymousover 14 years agoGreat story, very interesting and intriguing topic. Really looking forward to more chapters!
Anonymousover 14 years agoput this under fetish, non-consent or bdsm. Incest should just be loving stories
Raven_FLSTCover 14 years agoI don't mind the non-consent, especially since they find pleasure, but the whole brother-sister thing kinda goes against my grain. That said, it was still pretty hot, and I'll read more if you post it...I can see being won over because I simply like everything else you've written. :-)
Anonymousover 14 years agoI feel terrible for saying it, but I had to read it twice. Totally fucking hot. Please post more
Anonymousover 14 years agowhen he used the tableclothe to wipe a spurgy bm from his rump. Then, when the mayor noticed the stain, then the smell of what he wiped on the tableclothe, excellent! You have displayed a sense of humor and courage for writing about this tableclothe scene! Bravo and more from you on this topic, please!
Anonymousover 14 years agoI really enjoyed this and look forward to your next installation. it had the option of going so wrong, but you did a wonderful job. I can't wait to learn the rest of their story.
Anonymousover 12 years ago...people, I, enjoy your stories. We enjoy the fantasies...sick?....yeah...hell yeah!!!...but we don't like writing it that down,.we grin or get sticky from your shit and give you the 5 star salute. So no comment IS great comment.. You're good...we get you...I get you..sick, perverted, wicked, but just fantasy. Good stuff. I like your bent mind.Don't get discouraged or sick with worry. Who gives a shit?! You're a writer.
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