All Comments on 'Terran's World Ch. 02'

Really liked the first chapter, but found this second one boring and disappointing. The two royals show little honor and even less sense, and please save me from yet another 'spunky sword-wielding female'... ho-hummm.

I like the setting of this beautifully twisted tale. please keep writing.

both chapters are AWESOME. I like how two nobles are brought to perverse depravity. I like a lot of psychological play in good erotica and this does not disappoint. Problem with most incest stories is the lack of believability in the plot that drives them to commit incest, this achieves more.

wow girl! this definitely has a lot of potential! love it so far.keep writing and soon!

I really liked this, but I really like most of yours. Hope write some more for this. I would like to know how it ends.

It is nearly a year past but you didn't send a new chapter. I wonder who did win the war and I also wonder who did get the girl :) Terran? Cassius? Or Sandular?

I loved both chapters. You should write more.

Great story,great sex...keep it up it's fantastic so far.

I want her to get over her anger, fall in love with her brother, take over the kingdom and rule as King and Queen forever.

Not to my liking.

You did warn us, but I read anyway as you've surprised before.

I don't think the princess's sexual pleasure is realistic. Arousal and orgasm, yes. Desire and pleasure, NO. Doesn't fit with what I know of rape victims responses.

Still not sure about this one!

It had some interesting pieces, but especially this part needed better completion. Not as good as some of your other material. Gave it a 4 for originality.