All Comments on 'The Addiction of Cheating'

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No growth. Not likeable. No redeeming value. 1*

What a cunt

This sucked and the erotica wasn’t even well written :’(

Typical cheating slut, reminds me of my cheating slut ex-wife. I was a truck driver and usually gone 7-10 days at a time. I'd suspected that she'd been cheating on me for some time and that night I had my proof. And I took a lot of pictures. She came in from a b-day party so drunk she didn't know where she was. She was naked and I could see the wetness dripping down her legs. 2 men followed her into our house, and 1 of them said it was typical of her to have another man here when they brought her home. I followed them into our bedroom and watched them take off their clothes. Both of them were very large compared to me. 1 said I'd have to wait my turn as he was fucking her next. I watched his big cock stretch her pussy and as they rolled over, the 2nd man pushed his impressive cock into her ass! I'd only fucked her ass once and she cried the whole time saying that it hurt, yet here she was taking a huge cock deep in her! She said that if her husband had 1/2 as much dick, she would've never started cheating on him. By then I was naked beside our bed stroking my dick and pulled her head to me. Normally she only took a couple inches of me into her mouth, but this time she grabbed my hips and pulled all 7" of my dick into her mouth and throat. She pushed me away long enough to say that I could fuck her mouth like it was a pussy and when I was ready, to cum in her mouth. I invited them to stay a few more hours, and watched them both fuck her pussy at the same time. They both pulled out of her pussy and came in her mouth and she swallowed every drop! I even managed to get both of them in her ass at the same time! They were both gone when she woke up around 10 the next morning. She asked when I'd got home, and I told her about 30 minutes before she left for her b-day party. I

tossed a handful of Polaroids at her, and told her she needed to be gone when I got

back home later that day. I'd talked to a lawyer that morning while she slept, and filed for divorce. She begged me to let her stay, but I told her that I didn't need a slut like her in my life. I put the house up for sale and accepted the first offer within a week.

Quite the coincidence if this is an actually reality for the author. My first wife ended our 9 year marriage through the announcement that not only did she take up with a supervisor at work, but she was with child with him. I read thus story, despite the title, out of morbid curiosity. It's the first one I've read through cuz what happened in my case still bothers me 20 years later. Retribution- her "common law husband" told her after almost a decade that he no longer loved her. Payback's a bitch, and so is she!

Nothing against the story or its writer, just that it's not in my usual reading repertoire.

I think people are reacting way to serious about this story. It's obviously just someone telling their story. Idk why everyone is expecting Steven King quality. I thought it was cool.

I married the class slut thinking she would change. Was young stupid and needy. Needless to say. While I worked on the oil rigs... she would be banging someone or two. Small town news travels fast. Finally wised up and got loose of her.

At 36 met , dated and married goddess. A hard worker and life was great foe8 years.

Arriving home from work I was asked quite bluntly if we could swing. She mention 3 couples... I answered no to all three. But she wanted to swing. At least this one wanted me to get some too, I thought...

Swinging idea was her manipulation.

Shed hook me up with huge unattractive couples. While she, would seek out younger fit studs. Would refuse any cute younger couple I suggested.

Turns out, She was just like my first wife.

All the women I've met/ dated have done multiple guys after meeting me. Even the "religious" ones.

My 2 previous wives and when single, girlfriends would get mad and jealous if I so much as looked at another hot chick. Even though all of them were, they themselves cheating....

What gives?

Setting the morals of cheating aside, carrying the story into a personal fantasy spiced with a touch of taboo fire from cheating, this story had what I expect was the author's intent. I look forward to future posts.

So typical of anything a women does / the Adam and eve curse always emerges the lack of morality and self control , from the progenitors of life we get nothing but narcissism and depravity , Someone we men choice to be the back/ bone of our families have caused more disruptive and destructive pattern values " It seem to be ever so prevenient in America " The total lack of respect for family values .

Hard to believe she loves her husband!

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As one commenter of another story said: when you got nothing good to say --

click 1-star.

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What good is there to say about a cheating wife whore?

Just plain awful

Scores 1/5

Yes the cheating wife is an incorrigible slut. But were the writing and plot development handled well? Was the shift in perspective by the dissatisfied wife that moved her from accepting her lot in life (so-so sex) to changing it to one she liked better (unpredictably adventurous though a violation of her marriage vows) believable?

Ratings are supposed to be about the quality of the writing, not whether you liked what the main characters did. If you're gonna bitch about somebody's story idea because it doesn't fit your mindset...

WRITE YOUR OWN!!!

Good job here, Kelkay. A longer story might have allowed more character development, but that wasn't the point, was it... 4 out of 5. Kudos and Keep Writing.

Just another whore story !!!!