All Comments on 'The Adventure'

Great group story...not just "he did this and she did that" as most writers of group sex do. It was a great build-up and super, charged sex! Thanks.

exactly as Larry said. Great job!

One of the best stories I have read...well written and had me feeling as if I was there..great job..

Don't see a way it could have been better. Five stars!

This was so hot - more like this please

At times I felt like I was drowning in adverbs, but overall it's a wonderful story. Thanks.

Fucking Fantastic story! I hope there are more adventures!!

I felt like I was there watching….really a turn-on!

This was delightful. Loved how it all broke down, the way the characters succumbed to the moment. Excellent :)

The best written story to date and I have been reading a long time.