by EmilyandGeorge
Great group story...not just "he did this and she did that" as most writers of group sex do. It was a great build-up and super, charged sex! Thanks.
One of the best stories I have read...well written and had me feeling as if I was there..great job..
At times I felt like I was drowning in adverbs, but overall it's a wonderful story. Thanks.
I felt like I was there watching….really a turn-on!
This was delightful. Loved how it all broke down, the way the characters succumbed to the moment. Excellent :)
The best written story to date and I have been reading a long time.