by barry240646
A lovely, mellow story. Well written and I found it peaceful... Thanks you for taking the time to explore the growth of love between two disparate women without "man hating" becoming a theme...
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It is refreshing to read a story where the characters are actually people, not just avatars to hang sexual activity about. Mary and Jane's relationship develops naturally. It occasionally seems hurried in the writing, but I still get the sense that they are not rushing into a sexual relationship, which I think is all to the good. The remembrance of Jake, and the addition of Sister Helen add sweet humanizing touches as well. A sweet story indeed. Thank you for writing it.
Clearly written by a man. Couldn't get passed the first few paragraphs without cringing. Can we get a
separate category of lesbian stories solely written by lesbians for lesbians?
Gosh, your stories just keep getting better and better, Benji & the Stripper, Ethel & Olivia (with a superb twist), your supreme The Dog Walker, and now this, The Artist & the Muse. Thank you for making an old man cry.