All Comments on 'The Bear and the Jock Ch. 02'

The first choice is more exciting. More please!

I am voting for the second one.

I think the first choice will be better. Once he is broken, you can move on to the second choice.

I think bear should make him get a tattoo (something to suggest he is gay, maybe something avove is ass saying "fuck me")

shouldn't be sucking no twink dick

Oh please, please let it be the first scene. Naturally Jason would want to confirm his heterosexuality with some poor unsuspecting girl but it's not going to have the same excitement. This is not just about being gay or straight there is powerful dominance and powerlessness, shock and taboos. I can see that spit roasting Jason would make him see his true calling. I agree that it could be followed by the second, a sort of aftercare love scene.

Now the critique. I have really enjoyed both chapters, both made me laugh and edge on my seat and later on orgasm. Very well written, both characters are firmly in my imagination and I really like them. The sex is nicely detailed, although there should always be lube, especially for a beginner but still and all credible and arousing. Thanks for posting on this site xxx

I vote for Number 2. Wish I was in his place. Great story.

Option one please. Make him pay, the ex con doing definitely be into piss and harder stuff!

Great story so far! I'd love to see Bear feminize Jason a bit or maybe just have him wear panties or put in chastity if he cheats and fucks a girl.

5 stars!

How about Jason is on date (meal) with girl. Bear texts him with short video clip of Jason being used and text "Rest room. Now!" Jason has manliness brutally f*cked out of him, while girl waits. Eventually, she goes looking for Jason and ...

So where does it go next? I'd say scene one first, although honestly, I wouldn't be surprised if Jason found himself impotent the next time he tries to have sex with a girl. Being taken by Bear is going to affect his masculinity and his self image. Bear might still find out, though. And if he did...

And Jason will more willingly take Bear if it means that he can be Bear's exclusively, and not be shared out.

And this chapter RAWKS

I greatly enjoyed this chapter! Please no sharing!

Choice #2 please!

Choice #2 with a bit of bear eating Jason out please?

And turn Jason into Janet. Turn him out and let him do tricks from the bar.

Loved the chapter. Please no sharing yet. Let Jason submit to Bear by willingly taking him. Please continue...

Bear threatens to share him with an ex-con.... who winds up being a woman. But he only learns that after he begs daddy to warm him up, adding the bit of humiliation when the woman sees him getting rock hard from playing with Bear.

He gets jealous watching Bear enjoy her ass

Added bonus: he tried to bang her without permission. She has a strap on of course & they spit roast him. He wraps up eating Bears load from her pussy. (Not a fan of ass to mouth or piss, so I appreciate when there's not a huge focus on those.)

choice #1 please!

Choice 2 please

Choice #2 please!

#1!!

I love both chapters. Option 1 first, i think it makes more sense for jason to fuck a girl, and for bear to be willing to share, earlier rather than later in the story. Plus it sounds hot.

Option 2 then 1

#1

I'll say 2 then 1. After riding Bear willing,then Jason might freak out over his desires and then fuck a girl to try and convince himself he's straight. Makes sense to me that way.

Option 2 for sure!

Option 1, pleaseeee!!

#2 please

I'd love to see Jason willingly take Bear's cock up his ass. But with him doing it. Maybe sitting on it while facing outwards. You know so Bear could roam his hands all over his body.

2 then 1. Bear punished him for fucking a girl, but instead of staring him, he fucks Jason himself. Then the next day, Jason goes to apologize and willingly takes Bears’s cock.

Although it is about non-con, building more characters will limit the depth of main characters. Besides, if Jason was traditional, he might not take open relationship well.( sorry if it is not a relationship) Maybe most the reason is that I dont hold a positive point towards sex trade or something alike.

Option 1 please!

Option one please

Option 2 please

Way better plot line

So amazing!

I don't think Bear would acquiesce that quickly. Plus, Jason would try and assert his straightness still by trying and failing to be with a woman.

story and great ideas for following chapters.

I'd recommend the voluntary submission first, and even have Bear show him off at work a little bit, with Baby continuing to flip-flop about his identity while kinda living with a kinda special relationship with Bear. Then, on one of his flip-flops he would do the college girl and have Bear re-orient him to his situation and the... true depth of his commitment to Bear.

Option 2 please. He needs ro ride Bear. Willing but a little reluctant. Emotional struggle.

CBT, butt plug, spanking (hole included?) and not allowed to cum for a week.

Should the sub press charges or just go buy a 12 guage and blow Bear away? I started to read the second chapter and just couldnt do it, so maybe Im not being fair to the author. How does the victim credibly go from pain and PTSD to calling Bear "Daddy"?

Deffo keep Jason Bisexual but still exploring with Bear

Awesome Story deffo keep Jason flirting between women nd bear it's a really hot contrast

It would be nice to have Jason fall in love with Bear.