All Comments on 'The Bride Who Could Not Wait'

That was a very erotic story! I liked it a lot.

Loved the whole thing and the last line finished it off perfectly! I look forward to any further installments.

Damn, what a place to leave him (and us).

More, please?

This story was written much better than most in this wore and had a great ending. The brides enticing question was the perfect way to end such a unique story.

5- [4.65 = 93% = A (♡♡♡♡♡-)].

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EXCERPT FROM THE STORY

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... The couple was so busy fucking frantically that they never reacted to the stopping, or the opening doors. The groom's knees continued the same rhythmic flexing, thrusting himself deep into his bride as she bounced up and down in counter rhythm. I realized that I had been holding my breath, so made sure that I waited for the sound of the doors shutting before exhaling...

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This is a FIVE STAR story.