All Comments on 'The Car Mechanic and the Skier Pt. 02'

by SierraSprite

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

The End!? I hope not .

b0br0bb0br0bover 3 years ago
I Agree!

This really needs at least another chapter to finish up the divorce, wedding and settling in.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Per usual I love your writing, however...

... The End.

It appears to this reader you either hit a wall, and the story refused to write, or you became bored with the progression.

... I'm back to work and... umm... well crap. "The End".

starbanestarbaneover 3 years ago
The End

I sure hope this is not the end. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Another good one!

That end makes a perfect break, Meli's divorce is going to work out and Kate will marry Eric. The children get on together and the six central characters are forming a cohesive though non-traditional unit.

With the current divorce rate who would be rash enough to declare that the conventional family structure was the only one acceptable? Probably only the supporters of the religious money making organisations.

DPCDVR72DPCDVR72about 3 years ago

Great read, but there’s got to be more, can’t leave us hanging.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

C'mon!!

WHERE'S PART THREE????

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