All Comments on 'The Chase'

Very well written

but the plot definitely not my cup of tea, so to speak.

Great story.. Loved the ending

Patricia51, we love all of your stories and this is one of the best we have ever read. The ending was so outrageous that it not only took our breaths away, but it had us laughing till we were flowing tears. You are very talented and we hope both of us are like Julie at that age.

Outrageous doesn't get it, you stinker! How wicked, how evil, how decadent. Nice short story from a great erotic story teller.

Wow, wow, wow, brilliant piece of writing so very, very good!

shouldn't it be under lesbian category ? You might as well put it under erotic couplings or other mis leading cateogry.

From white at the party the night before to black in the morning when she tucked them under her pillow. That and some grammatical and spelling errors diluted the fun.

The ending was priceless! I think they are going to raise their average times of having sex together higher telling each other their stories.

I rather enjoy stories where the hunter becomes the hunted or the spider becomes the fly.

You done good again. I loved it. You always tell a very good story and this was no exception. A few grammatical errors, did not detract from the story.

To anon on the Left coast, re read the story Sonya's panties were white, not Julia's.

A great read, keep up the pace.

George

DIFFERENT TWIST! BUT JUST DIDN'T DO IT FOR ME.

THANKS FOR WRITING!

SEXMATE

You have the con(wo)men getting conned! The "sting" of the Universe!!!

You are brilliant!!!

Hy Patricia,

I loved the story are you going to continue with the rest of the storie i would love to finish reading the next chapter.

Pat Murray

Great story! I wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Your writing style is great. Please write more.

Great story with the surprise ending! I really wished for such a chance to love my fav English lit teacher years ago at the university. Never happened EXCEPT IN DEVOTED FANTASY. Thanks for re-creating for me a chance to revisit those feelings, a tender kindness much appreciated, Patricia 51.

"Share the Love"

Nuff said!

I was about to say that women seducers are just as bad as men at making women into cheating spouses. Then you turned the tables on me. What a unique story. Thanks.

The plot, throughout, was fresh, thrilling, and discrete. Thank you!

The one thing I especially loved about this was how the usual cheating wife excuse of, "It'll spice up our sex life," answered the criticism of why can't HE spice it up as well, and it worked!

Nope. I like a lot of your work, but don’t need lesbians in my LW stories.

It's not cheating if both spouses agree to it with no coersion. So 5 stars.

Well written with a nice twist , when the victim becomes the prey ! 5 boners for this one !

Big picture, this is a story about a creepy couple who use lies and deceit to obtain sex from others who are younger and more gullible but probably equally creepy. It's basically disgusting behavior. Why would I give a fuck about any of them?

Sounds like everyone got what they wanted, wrapped in in a well-told tale.