All Comments on 'The Deep End Ch. 01'

Great story -and very plausible. She's obviously got a taste for variety on the cock-department. Maybe she and Jeff would join a swingers club. I look forward to more of your salacious writing...

did you place the old comment yourself?

This is far from reality and just poor imagination.

Great story. loved it from start to finish. Write more like these please!

Sally I absolutely love your stories.Any guy that isn`t turned on by your writing must be dead from the waist down .Keep them cumming girl....

I have just finished Chapter 1 and had a hard on all the way through it, Now I am wondering what is going to happen at a work function, Larry will meet Jeff's wife, this will be interesting.

One of the worst on this here site. "1*" !!

Extreme right-wing is the exact opposite of feminist, you moron.

I loved the story. flowed well and a 10" Cock just added to the hotness of the sex. Going home so Hubby can mix his in with Larry's. Fucking great!

The only down side I saw was she doesn't swallow (boo) and won't take it in the Ass, (double Boo). She's only getting a part of the whole experience. I'm no guy getting a hooker but if I were I'd expect getting all three holes with her swallowing. Otherwise good stuff.

Chrissie

TBC

I'm hoping that Larry calls and fucks her as a hooker once more. Maybe offering her to a group of business men to secure a deal.

Hate when random junk is put into a story, and the side note that was, Bill, just seemed pointless. The first time story wasn't overly relevant either to be fair.

Story was okay in general, but as with your other stories you need to use proper punctuation to separate your dialogue and narrative. It makes reading something harder as it is. Punctuation is no accident - so you should use it.

Just as ridiculous as all your other cheating whore stories.

Your stories are okay but you need to run your work past a skilled editor. You fail to put your character’s questions and statements in quotes, you substitute the word “your” when you should be using “you’re” and other errors.

Sally Tart, I absolutely loved your stories. This last one was really sexy. Keep up writing those stories. Copoyenko

Work needs a good editor, both for grammar and punctuation.

As for the story, wife and I did it once, as she wanted to know how it felt to be paid for sex. We had a lot of good sex replaying it in the bedroom, but never did it again

I would much prefer having a hooker for a wife than a cheater for a wife.

Hot, hot storytelling Sally Tart. What a fascinating situation, ripe for developing. I look forward to reading more of your adventures.