All Comments on 'The Escort Ch. 02'

This is a story about a prostitute. It does not belong in Loving Wives.

I sure hope Don is a well hung black stud for part three.

As for why this is in Loving Wives, well she is a wife and I guess you could tell by the story she is doing some pretty serious loving. I hope that's not too confusing

Hmmm, wouldn't it be interesting if hubby showed up as a client? Or, some veriation thereof.

Hmmm, wouldn't it be interesting if hubby showed up as a client? Or, some veriation thereof.

B/C JPB is way too obtuse to see that IS a

difference between a wife and a whore

I'm want the fall out when there men find out somethings not right ..... then the end of there lives as they new them.

Interesting story about ignored and frustrated wife who shows some independence! For those who knock it, it does happen in the "real world". Treat a woman like she's second rate, keep money from her and show her you are more important than she is and ignore her in bed you just might get this.

Yes there are consequences and maybe Just Plain Bob will let us know what they are.

It's funny how all the people who KNOW what is coming, yet they still read the story and write a negative comment. Don't read it. This author has established a genre and you know the plot. If you don't like it, pass it by.

Verbose with no real direction.

I have concluded that JPB should stick to short stories.

His short stories are better than his chapter stories. I wouldn't be surprised if he admits that even he gets bored while writing the long ones.

I've read this story on another site and it's oh hum...in fact his stories are all over the net...I reread his stories on other sites hoping against hope that he had the decency to revise his schlock...so far no luck...he keeps recyling garbage which is perhaps good for the environment.

Nothing gained in reading it and nothing accomplished in the story as having spoken to escorts none of them reflect what is going on in your story.

Didn't know Jim was her pimp. What next?

nasty whore.

I always regret reading a well-written story about a character I hate. She's just a high-aid cheater and you captured her perfectly.