All Comments on 'The Failed Wedding'

Thanks for sharing.

Stupid thing won't let me change it. Great job!

So freaking Hot! I would love to see more about their relationship.

Betty is such an obnoxious and unlikeable character, I don't understand how anyone could stand to be around her for more than two minutes. I hope Frank leaves her at the altar again.

guy must have been hard up. wonder how much the divorce will cost him. she will have a couple of kids first may or may not be his. funny thing is you have to pay if they are yours or not.

Oh I forgot you are Frank. TK U MLJ LV NV

One obviously didn't read the whole story and the other doesn't have a clue on relationships.

Don't you just love Loving Wives trolls.

Anyone who spells it "alter" instead of "altar" deserves to be altered.

Thank you for a wonderfull story, Tx.

Betty and Frank are so good together, and I'm sure

they will live happy ever after.

Your line, "Weak milk toast guys" made me laugh big time. :) :) :)

HOT! HOT! HOT!

Really enjoyed the story....she is so lucky she did not get stuck with cheating low life whimpy Brad!! As for the mr. anonymous comments....really!!! Give me a break it is erotica...the very best kind.

A modern day knight in chrome armor saves the day! Loved it!

You are one of the rare writers who get a woman's orgasm right. For a moment I wondered if you'd been spying on me and my honey.

This was one of the best stories I have read on this site for a while now. The romance and character dialog are so believable, so well crafted they leave the reader spellbound. Once I started this tale, there was just no way I would stop reading until I had finished. Exceptional work of art. Thank you.

As for the two 'Annonymous' commenters that preceed mine, I pitty you both. The fact you felt a need to turn this into an English assignment, and a rather petty one at that, leads me to wonder if you are capable of enjoying a story for its' emotional content. Your loss. As for me, I only concern myself with the mundane grammatical and spelling aspect of a story if it is so bad that it seriously distracts from the story telling. This author has no concern in that regard.

I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks!

I would venture to say this is the best story I've read on this site

Looking forward to their adventures

They need to meet up with the other couple

But it ended too quickly. I need some more details. Does she seek revenge against her ex-boyfriend almost groom? She kick her girlfriends butt? Does she go to law school? Does she go "kinky"? She sign a pre-nuptial agreement? So many questions require a sequel. I enjoyed it until the short-armed ending.

How long before he is able to get gentle full penetration? Can she keep from passing out when he gets there? What kind of arrangement is made for her pursuit of a law degree? What, besides sex, do they find in common to help them fall deeper into love? What kind of a bike does she get? When does she find out how much she likes his parents? How do they travel together for his work without too much disruption to her job for him and her education? What ongoing education/information/business-building/recreation-activities does he have planned? How actualized does she find hereself becoming and how does she help him develop? Do they choose to develop a casual life style all together or do the mix in some more formal activities? Do they travel or do they just work wherever and enjoy where they end up? Do they end up enjoying the outdoors? . . .

Lynn :-)

That was a great story. Please, is there another chapter?

One is left at the altar .... With two a's.

And you alter, e.g., the findings .... With an a and an e.

Beautifully written. both the feelings and the erotica. Glad to read that you've had your touch for a long time.

...I could not resist commenting about the analmousies comments. Didn't you dullards ever consider that TxRad was being punny?

Cause I don't know about you but getting married sure 'altered' my life!

So I guess that he had been checking her out and knew that the wimp she was going to marry was not good enough for her. He said he saw her at the picnic and wondered about her.She got a nice guy that just happened to be RFR and her ex fiancee got a slut. Alls well that ends well.

Is there a sequil to this story so the ex and the slut can eat fried CROW

Ron. Texas

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It is crazy to go from dumped at the alter to lets get married to someone else in like 2 days but I think this story should continue. I want to see the ex groom and brides maid get their when they get back. How funny is it gonna be when he goes to go to work after the "honeymoon" and goes into the bosses office and theirs his ex married to his boss and he gets fired.

Very good story, probably my favorite of TXRAD's. Sure, it's improbable, but that's what makes it so much more interesting. Thanks, TxRad.

Nicely done but not enough substance. Could have followed up with another page or two 4*s.

Definitely needs another chapter

Great fantasy.

Great story but needed a better end with slut Karen and Brad meeting their comeuppanxe

I would love to read more about this couple and their toy drawer, and of course Brad and Karen receiving their just desserts.

Great story. Great writing. Hot! Hot! Hot!

Unfortunately, ALL of this author's stories leave me wanting more of an ending. All the stories feel like 1/2 a story; lots of details and then. . . we're done. ;-{ Just too bad. I'm sure some writer's could make a "career" just writing the next chapter for each story. In any event, I can't mark down such a fine story just because I'm dissatisfied with where the author ends the story.

mfj

Is the neighbor's name Gary or Greg?

If it’s your goal to ‘always leave them wanting more,” then you’ve succeeded, yet again.

Seriously hot story.

Just as someone mentioned earlier : The story „leaves me wanting more of an ending. All the stories feel like 1/2 a story; lots of details and then. . . we're done. ;-{ Just too bad.“

So it *could* have been a really excellent story, but is - unfortunately - just a *good* one !

4/5 stars!